2016年MBA聯(lián)考寫作精選習題及范文(6)
2015-03-04 10:35 | 太奇MBA網(wǎng)
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思路點撥
圖畫中的一只小綿羊，正呆在一塊大石頭的陰影下面。但是它樂觀、豁達地認為，有陰影，那么就說明有陽光。這幅圖無疑向我們傳達了一種健康的人生哲學：樂觀生活、達觀處世。由于這是一篇人生哲理類文章，所以文章安排可以相對自由一些：
第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：利用正反舉例論證悲觀與樂觀的差距+總結句;第三段：倡導一種樂觀生活、達觀處世的人生態(tài)度和人生哲學。思維拓展
本文也可以從世界觀、人生觀的角度入手。
相反，如果是一幅表明悲觀厭世的圖片，我們也可以采取同樣的手法進行處理。
高分范文
As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine. What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。
As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism. If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life. Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough. If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half. Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings toward the same life。
There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists. Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude. What’s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective. As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up. Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”
佳作妙譯
上面的漫畫清楚地表現(xiàn)出這只山羊不顧陰影的威脅仍然保持樂觀，因為它相信有陰影的地方就一定有陽光。圖片中反映的問題是積極的和富有啟發(fā)性的。
我認為作者要表達的意義是要提醒我們保持樂觀心態(tài)的重要性。如果漫畫中的山羊終日悲觀地生活在陰影中，它將永遠無法獲得舒適和幸福的生活。類似的例子千千萬，但是我認為下面的例子就足夠有說服力。如果這里有半杯水，悲觀的人會抱怨只剩下半杯了，而樂觀的人在慶幸還有半杯可以喝。顯然，面對同樣的生活，他們會有不同的感受。
毫無疑問，樂觀者擁有更高的幸福指數(shù)，而悲觀者永遠也體會不到。因此我們必須以積極的態(tài)度面對生活。而且樂觀的情緒能強烈地感染他人，這就意味著如果我們以樂觀的視角面對周圍的朋友們，他們也會同樣地樂觀。于是，樂觀和幸福的氣氛自然而然地就建立起來了。因此，讓我們把著名詩人雪萊的名句銘記在心吧：冬天來了，春天還會遠么?
