2016年MBA聯(lián)考寫作精選習題及范文(2)

2015-03-02 16:26 | 太奇MBA網(wǎng)

　　思路點撥

　　本圖中，一個女孩正在因一個問題感到困惑，“10牛的水是否產(chǎn)生10牛的浮力?”。于是她上網(wǎng)求助于網(wǎng)友，網(wǎng)友的答案更是五花八門，說對說錯的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可見，這幅圖反應了這樣一個現(xiàn)實：網(wǎng)絡文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以這樣設計：

　　第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：網(wǎng)絡的利+舉例，網(wǎng)絡的弊+舉例;第三段：提出建議措施——取其精華，去其糟粕。

　　思路拓展

　　所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本范文提供的思路進行論述。例如，城市化的利與弊。大學擴招的利與弊等。

　　高分范文

　　Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online. Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow. It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。

　　The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows. On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience. For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on. On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad. For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating. Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。

　　In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time. On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided. Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work。

　　佳作妙譯

　　如圖所示，圖片中一個女孩正在網(wǎng)上問一個問題，來自于網(wǎng)友的答案差異太大了，以至于女孩很困惑到底該聽誰的。很明顯，人們面臨困境的時候上網(wǎng)提問的現(xiàn)象已經(jīng)成為一種時尚。

　　這幅圖所隱含的意義可以闡釋如下。一方面，因特網(wǎng)為我們提供了很大便利。例如，通過百度等搜索引擎鍵入一些命令、點擊幾下鼠標，我們就可以獲得幾乎各個領域的知識。另一方面，由于因特網(wǎng)上有海量的信息，很難區(qū)分好的信息和壞的信息。例如青少年可能會把錯誤的信息誤認為是正確的，其結(jié)果是非常具有毀滅性的。網(wǎng)上的一些不健康信息也可能會給人們帶來負面影響。

　　總之，一方面，充分利用因特網(wǎng)來提高效率，節(jié)約時間，這很重要。另一方面，應該采取有效的措施教育人們?nèi)ヅ懦W(wǎng)上不合適的甚至錯誤的數(shù)據(jù)，以免被誤導。只有這樣，網(wǎng)絡才能更好地為我們的生活、學習和工作服務。